I am learning to write an introduction that hooks in my audience.Here are 3 versions.Which Monday Morning introduction do you like the best and why?
Every Monday it fells like I only get to got to sleep for one minute!Seriously it’s like I went to sleep at 1.00 am.Actually I did (I think).Did you know that every Monday when I'm told to get changed I lie down and when my parents come I stand up and pretend I'm getting changed.
Dreaming happily about chocolate I heard a stomp “Boom Boom Boom” .I saw a chocolate monster saying get up in a very very deep voice.My eyes flung open and my mum was shouting “ GET UP”.
Mouth watering chocolate donuts I dreamt about.My happy meter was one thousand and ten present.Then suddenly it went all the way down to the big zero,as my um was screaming “Get up.” What a horrible Monday (as usual. )
Dreaming happily about chocolate I heard a stomp “Boom Boom Boom” .I saw a chocolate monster saying get up in a very very deep voice.My eyes flung open and my mum was shouting “ GET UP”.
Mouth watering chocolate donuts I dreamt about.My happy meter was one thousand and ten present.Then suddenly it went all the way down to the big zero,as my um was screaming “Get up.” What a horrible Monday (as usual. )












