tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8338739537252322339.post885599348180614434..comments2014-11-08T00:12:00.529+13:00Comments on Esrah: My 10th BirthdayPES Blog Gmailhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10430434432980030044noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8338739537252322339.post-73617467437996086912012-02-20T12:16:49.110+13:002012-02-20T12:16:49.110+13:00Wow Esrah!
This is an amazing blog about your 10t...Wow Esrah!<br /><br />This is an amazing blog about your 10th birthday. It is really well written and I can tell that you planned out what you were going to write before you blogged. <br /><br />Remember the 5W's and 1H to help you organise your thoughts.<br /><br />Keep up the awesome work son!<br /><br />DadDadnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8338739537252322339.post-72551171486525310092012-02-17T17:39:07.865+13:002012-02-17T17:39:07.865+13:00Hi Esrah again,
Sorry my mistake. The previous c...Hi Esrah again, <br /><br />Sorry my mistake. The previous comment was created by me (mum).<br /><br />Thanks,Mumnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8338739537252322339.post-39710750742108035722012-02-17T17:33:02.375+13:002012-02-17T17:33:02.375+13:00Hi Esrah,
This is a really exciting recount of yo...Hi Esrah,<br /><br />This is a really exciting recount of your birthday and I'm glad you enjoyed yourself together with your brother and friends. <br /><br />Don't worry about your placing in Lazer strike, that's just life, sometimes you lose and sometimes you win. You have many skills and talents Esrah that God has blessed you with. So just keep trying your best!<br /><br />Superb Writing Esrah, keep up the good work and I look forward to reading your next post.Esrah Thttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01142488980358577378noreply@blogger.com